dijous, 13 de febrer del 2020

Opinion Essay - Daniel Esteban Valero

Many people believe that the violence in society, especially among teenagers, increases when more violence is shown on television. A lot of parents whose soon see this type of scenes are worried cause of seeing this in the news repeatedly, but that assumption is really truth?

From my point of view the violence is a natural feeling of the human, which one must learn to control it, many times the violence is exposed to people too young, which run the risk of not being able to control this feeling, although is not usually the case. Therefore, we can see a tag with a number in the case of a game or movie that mark the limit of age to see certain scenes, although being honest, the person who sees this don't pay attention on it.

However, have been confirmed several cases of an augury of violence in which the person in question suffered from mental disorders cause of this violence. Furthermore, in many other cases the person that had this symptom present an age lower than sixteen.

In conclusion, we should replace the expression "If a lower quantity of violence was shown on television, the level of violence in our society would be reduced" by "If the parents controlled better the things what they soon see on the television or the video games they play, the risk of violence would be reduced". 



 

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